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Part 2

작성자: tenrain 담당 튜터: Heni2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The reason why Huh Jun E succeeded is that he had a strong passion for studying mathematics. Because he studied hard to solve many dilemmas, he succeeded and became the most recognizable mathematician in the world.

To succeed like Huh Jun E, I should do two things. First, I need to study hard to learn more about math and science. Second, I need to enhance my mathematical formula-proving skills by solving many math puzzles. I will keep studying and try to advance my own math research.
튜터 교정 답변

The reason why Huh Jun E succeeded is that he had a strong passion for studying mathematics. Because he studied hard to solve many dilemmas, he succeeded and became the most recognizable mathematician in the world.

To succeed like Huh Jun E, I should do two things. First, I need to study hard to learn more about math and science. Second, I need to enhance my mathematical formula-proving skills by solving many math puzzles. I will keep studying and tryING to advance my own math research.

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