english dairy

Hi Eliza. I want to improve my English skills faster, so I’m writing an English diary. Could you help me make my sentences clearer?

Last week, I went to Yeouido cherry blossom festival with friends. We ate tasty food, such as bulgogi bibibbab, and walked the road lined with cherry blossom. We took a pictures each others with flowers. I even got a lot of the best pictures of my life

Last Friday, I went back there for a run at night . There are so many people but the cherry blossoms at night were even more beautiful than during the day. I ran 5 km, filmed myself running, and made a Reels.

Last week, I went to Yeouido cherry blossom festival with friends. We ate tasty food, such as bulgogi bibimbap, and walked the road lined with cherry blossoms. We took pictures of each other with flowers. I even got a lot of the best pictures of my life.

Last Friday, I went back there for a run at night. There were so many people but the cherry blossoms at night were even more beautiful than during the day. I ran 5 km, filmed myself running, and made reels.