Movie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
About 2 weeks ago,
I went to a movie theater with my family to watch a Movie, Transformer 4.
As you know, it is a blockbuster and a very exciting movie.
So I wanted to watch it with family especially my son and daughter.
I booked the tickets online, and I found a movie theater that had 4DX screen.
Do you know the 4DX? You must wear 3D glasses, and the seat is moving aournd,
sometimes wind is blowing and water is comming.
I tought my children like it.
But it was my fault. I didn't ask their thought.
Anyway my son was enjoying it, but my daughter was scared to watch it.
I think she didn't like dark place, and wearing 3D glasses.
My daughter wanted to get out the screen, but nobody could take care with her.
Because all my family except my daughter wanted to watch it.
My wife brought her to out of the screen and looked for a good place.
Finally my wife found a play ground in the same building,
and we could enjoy Transformer 4.
I went to a movie theater with my family to watch a Movie, Transformer 4.
As you know, it is a blockbuster and a very exciting movie.
So I wanted to watch it with family especially my son and daughter.
I booked the tickets online, and I found a movie theater that had 4DX screen.
Do you know the 4DX? You must wear 3D glasses, and the seat is moving aournd,
sometimes wind is blowing and water is comming.
I tought my children like it.
But it was my fault. I didn't ask their thought.
Anyway my son was enjoying it, but my daughter was scared to watch it.
I think she didn't like dark place, and wearing 3D glasses.
My daughter wanted to get out the screen, but nobody could take care with her.
Because all my family except my daughter wanted to watch it.
My wife brought her to out of the screen and looked for a good place.
Finally my wife found a play ground in the same building,
and we could enjoy Transformer 4.
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