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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 05. 14 조회 1932

One-card Rule

작성자: hunet_daewoong-ella. 담당 튜터: Neal2
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Hello Lucky, thank you for the wonderful lesson yesterday.
I would like to introduce the 'one-card game rule' adding some of other rules that i missed yesterday.
I would say you can play with your granddaughter.
I guess you understood the game rule in spite of my short explanation. there are some additional information.
- when there's no card to discard (no same value or suits), you should pick the card in draw file (stock of cards)
- there is attack / dispense card : (joker is attack card). Value "A" and "2" is also. when someone discard "A" next person should have 3 or 5 card --keep goin
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Hello Lucky, thank you for the wonderful lesson yesterday.
I would like to introduce the 'one-card game rule' adding some of other rules that i [I] missed yesterday.
I would say you can play with your granddaughter.
I guess you understood the game rule [RULES,[ in spite [DESPITE MY] short explanation. there are [IS] some additional information.
- when there's no card to discard (no same value or suits), you should pick the card in draw file (stock of cards)
- there is [AN] attack / dispense card : ([A] joker is [N] attack card). Value "A" and "2" is [ARE, TOO   OR ARE, AS WELL]. so when someone discard[S] "A" [, THE] next person should have 3 or 5 card --keep goin[G   OR  KEEP GOIN']

 

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