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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 05. 29 조회 2063

My presentation

작성자: hri1_minuk.sung@hlco 담당 튜터: FionaA2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I attended academic conference last week.
I presented a paper on how to tune pedal feeling for electric vehicle.
E-vehicle is not applied with general engine. So current brake system is not able to be applied.
instead different device is applied not using source from engine.
i presented how to tune the device.

AI already influence our life. Automobile industry is no exception.
You can experience autonomous driving through AI technology.
AI learns the routes of places you frequently visit or go everyday or your favorite music or shows then AI can provide them to you without any commands
튜터 교정 답변

I attended academic conference last week.
I presented a paper on how to tune pedal feeling for electric vehicle.
E-vehicle is not applied with general engine. So current brake system is not able to be applied.
instead different device is applied not using source from engine.
i presented how to tune the device.

AI already influence our life. Automobile industry is no exception.
You can experience autonomous driving through AI technology.
AI learns the routes of places you frequently visit or go everyday or your favorite music or shows then AI can provide them to you without any commands

 

Thank you lets discuss this in our next lesson ..Goodday

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