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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 15 조회 14551

Pros and Cons of the GPS

작성자: pos600333 담당 튜터: Patrick2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
As I said at the last talk, GPS has following advantages;
First, it provide the way to go the target place. We can go anywhere using GPS even though we don't know the roads and have the maps around them. Second, we can get the information about traffic conditions. We can bypass the traffic-jam and go fast. Third, it gives the information about the location of speed surveillance cameras. We can drive evading from monitoring of the police-office.

However, GPS has some disadvantages;
In the underground or very high places, it gets mis-information about the location. Additionally, most drivers depend on the same guidance of the navigations, and that aggravate thes traffic-jam. Some drivers misuse the information about the location of speed surveillance cameras and they tend to enjoy over-speed. That is, it can be the cause of the traffic accidents.
튜터 교정 답변

As I said during our last talk, GPS has the following advantages; First, it provides us with a way to get to the target place. We can go anywhere using GPS even if we don't know the roads or have the maps around us. Second, we can get the information about traffic conditions. We can bypass traffic-jams and go fast. Third, it gives the information about the location of speed surveillance cameras. We can drive while evading monitoring by the police. However, GPS has some disadvantages; Underground or at very high places, it gets mis-information about the location. Additionally, most drivers depend on the same directions and that causes traffic-jams. Some drivers misuse the information about the location of speed surveillance cameras and they tend to enjoy driving too fast. In this case, GPS's can be the cause of the traffic accidents.

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