My business trip 1.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello, Hannah!
I think you said it would be better to write a letter about my business trip.
I prefer short business trips to long ones. But if I have to go on an overseas business trip, a long trip is okay!
I rarely go on a business trip in this department now.
But I went out of town a lot when I was working in the City Development Project Department.
(for example, Seoul, Busan, etc. in my country)
And I also went on an overseas business trips to Japan, Singapore, Hong Kong, Shanghai and Taiwan for architectural benchmarking.
I think you said it would be better to write a letter about my business trip.
I prefer short business trips to long ones. But if I have to go on an overseas business trip, a long trip is okay!
I rarely go on a business trip in this department now.
But I went out of town a lot when I was working in the City Development Project Department.
(for example, Seoul, Busan, etc. in my country)
And I also went on an overseas business trips to Japan, Singapore, Hong Kong, Shanghai and Taiwan for architectural benchmarking.
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