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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 06. 18 조회 1813

My business trip 3.

작성자: yanadoo-43_ih2007042 담당 튜터: HannahP2usa
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Someday If I have a chance , I hope to go on a business trip to New York, London and Paris for my business trip with my co-worker.

Thank you for reading my story.
(Writing this took about 2 hours. lol! )

See you later!
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Hi Juyeong,

Great wrap-up! 

Just some minor notes:

- "Someday if I get the chance, I hope to go on a business trip to New York,, London and Paris."

I'm so grateful for the effort. I know you said it took you hours to get this done but it really shows how your proficiency in grammar is growing. Keep up the great work!

Hannah

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