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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 06. 20 조회 1792

for Eczema

작성자: ssg1_IK220504 담당 튜터: Ann2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I would like to recommend cosmetic producta containing high concentration of D-panthenol and madecassoside for your skin condition.
Avoid steroid ingredients, because they make yours dermis very weak.
튜터 교정 답변

I would like to recommend cosmetic producta containing high concentration of D-panthenol and madecassoside for your skin condition.
Avoid steroid ingredients, because they make yours dermis very weak.

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