Please feedback for lesson 3

Hi Lee Sihyeon, I have highlighted the changes in red. It seems as if you were only able to submit part of the presentation 

Hi everyone! It gives me a great pleasure to welcome you to this conference. I hope you are all having a great time. My name is Erica, and I'm a LCL export team manager. I'm here today to talk about the ocean freight event for Europe and Surabaya, Indonesia, which is of great importance to our company. I'm sure that over the next 10 minutes.
You all will learn and get informations a lot. So please refer handout that I provided you guys before starting the presentation. If you look at the screen over there, we will start of comparison of the volume of cargo between other ports and Europe, Surabaya. You can see vol