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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 07. 01 조회 1887

Sad accident

작성자: mangolang_ijj00@lgcn 담당 튜터: MiaH2usa
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https://n.news.naver.com/article/081/0003554160?cds=news_edit

This is the article I talked about in our class. Sad accident that occurred near my site.
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Oh my gosh - this looks really bad! It's unfortunate when people get into accidents like this! 

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