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i like going to cafes.

작성자: kenoi 담당 튜터: rosey
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I like going to cafes in my free time because I can listen to music, chat with my friends, and enjoy yummy drinks.
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I like going to cafés in my free time because I can listen to music, chat with my friends, and enjoy delicious drinks. 

"Cafes" - "Cafés" [with the accent, which is more formal/correct in English, though "cafes" is widely accepted too]

"Yummy drinks" - "Delicious drinks" [a bit more formal or refined, depending on your tone]

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