English Interview Practice #1

I’m practicing for an English interview. 
I’m practicing for an English interview. 

The task is to give a 30-second introduction of Korea to first-time visitors. 
The task is to give a 30-second introduction to Korea for first-time visitors.

Could you kindly check if any of my sentences sound awkward?
Could you kindly check whether any of my sentences sound awkward?

Welcome to Korea.
Welcome to Korea.

Our country is known for its harmony of tradition and modern life.
Our country is known for its harmony of tradition and modern life.

In Seoul, you can visit palaces like Gyeongbokgung and also enjoy modern shopping districts.
In Seoul, you can visit palaces like Gyeongbokgung and also enjoy modern shopping districts.

You will experience K-culture, such as K-pop, Korean food, and the warm hospitality of our people.
You will experience K-culture, such as K-pop, Korean food, and the warm hospitality of our people.

I hope your stay in Korea will be comfortable and memorable. 
I hope your stay in Korea will be comfortable and memorable.