English Interview Practice #3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.
Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.
Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
튜터 교정 답변
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