목록으로 돌아가기
공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 09. 09 조회 1499

English Interview Practice #3

작성자: yanadoo-41_hyunha7 담당 튜터: Yoann
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.

Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
튜터 교정 답변

✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.
✔️ My hobby is traveling with my family every year.

Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.
Through these trips, I can experience different cultures and meet new people.

They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.
They have helped me become more open-minded and motivated.

✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. 
✔️ I liked Sydney, Australia the most. 

The city has beautiful scenery, and it was also my first trip with my mother, so it remains a very special memory for me. 
The city had beautiful scenery, and since it was my first trip with my mother, it remains a very special memory for me.

She enjoyed it so much that she even said she wanted to come back again, since she really loves nature. 
She enjoyed it so much that she said she wanted to return, since she truly loves nature.

I hope to visit Sydney once more in the future as a cabin crew member.
I hope to visit Sydney again in the future as a cabin crew member.

Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡
Thank you for helping me improve my English writing.♡

교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!