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English Interview Practice #4

작성자: yanadoo-41_hyunha7 담당 튜터: Yoann
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Q4: Please tell me about your personality./ I’m a very active and outgoing person who loves to hang out with others. When I spend time with people, I gain energy and feel refreshed.I feel truly happy when I can help others.I realized that working in the service field suits me well, and I want to continue in this field for a long time.
Q: Can you tell me about weaknesses of your personality?/ I tend to do many things at the same time, so I get tired easily. For example, I study TOEIC, prepare for certifications, and practice interviews all together.so I get tired easily.Now, I try to plan.
튜터 교정 답변

Q4: Please tell me about your personality.
Q4: Please tell me about your personality.

I’m a very active and outgoing person who loves to hang out with others. 
I'm a very active and outgoing person who loves hanging out with others.

When I spend time with people, I gain energy and feel refreshed.
When I spend time with people, I feel energized and refreshed.

I feel truly happy when I can help others.
I feel genuinely happy when I am able to help others.

I realized that working in the service field suits me well, and I want to continue in this field for a long time.
I have realized that working in the service field suits me well, and I want to continue in this field for a long time.


Q: Can you tell me about weaknesses of your personality?
Q: Can you tell me about the weaknesses in your personality?

I tend to do many things at the same time, so I get tired easily. 
I tend to do many things at once, so I get tired easily.

For example, I study TOEIC, prepare for certifications, and practice interviews all together. so I get tired easily.
For example, I study for the TOEIC, prepare for certifications, and practice interviews all at the same time, so I get tired easily.

Now, I try to plan.
Now, I try to make a plan.

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