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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 09. 11 조회 1583

English Interview Practice #5

작성자: yanadoo-41_hyunha7 담당 튜터: Yoann
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
What kind of crew do you want to be?

I believe cabin crew members help passengers travel safely and comfortably.
I want to be a friendly crew who makes passengers feel relaxed.
On my first flight in sixth grade, a flight attendant impressed me.
She checked if I was nervous and spoke to me kindly.
Since then, I have wanted to be a crew who makes passengers feel as comfortable as with family. feel truly happy when I can help others.
I realized that working in the service field suits me well, and I want to continue in this field for a long time.

Thanks teacher ♥
튜터 교정 답변

What kind of crew do you want to be?
What kind of crew would you like to be part of?

I believe cabin crew members help passengers travel safely and comfortably.
I believe that cabin crew members ensure passengers travel safely and comfortably.

I want to be a friendly crew who makes passengers feel relaxed.
I want to be a friendly crew member who helps passengers feel relaxed and at ease.

On my first flight in sixth grade, a flight attendant impressed me.
I was impressed by a flight attendant on my first flight when I was in sixth grade.

She checked if I was nervous and spoke to me kindly.
She noticed I was nervous and spoke to me with kindness.

Since then, I have wanted to be a crew who makes passengers feel as comfortable as with family. feel truly happy when I can help others.
Since then, I’ve wanted to become a cabin crew member who makes passengers feel as comfortable as they do with family. I feel truly happy when I can help others.

I realized that working in the service field suits me well, and I want to continue in this field for a long time.
I’ve realized that working in the service industry suits me well, and I’m eager to build a long-term career in it.

Thanks teacher ♥
Thanks teacher ♥

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