9/14 Homework
I just left all the work to my future.
Usually I buy something impulsively, like a card or a pen.
I always lose it.
Last year I saw a TV program that was selling bags.
I felt really bad at that time.
I'm exactly in the same situation.
Next week is my salary day.
1. Little bit worried about my this weekend,
- S Correction: I’m a little bit worried about this weekend.
- T Revision: Great!
2. I just left all the works to the future of me.
- S Correction: I just left all the work to my future.
- T Revision: I just left all the work to my future self.
3. Usually I just buy something impulsive like card, and pen.
- S Correction: Usually I buy something impulsively, like a card or a pen.
- T Revision: I usually buy many things impulsively, like cards or pens. (Changed to plural)
4. I always lost it every time. (Present)
- S Correction: I always lose it.
- T Revision: I always lose them. (Changed to plural)
5. Last year I just saw a tv program that just selling bags.
- S Correction: Last year I saw a TV program that was selling bags.
- T Revision: Great!
6. My feelings really bad in that time. (past)
- S Correction: I felt really bad at that time.
- T Revision: Great!
7. I'm in that case right now.
- S Correction: I'm exactly in the same situation.
- T Revision: I'm in the same situation right now.
8. Next week my salary day.
- S Correction: Next week is my salary day.
- T Revision: Great!
GREAT JOB TODAY JIA! YOU'VE SHOWN MASSIVE IMPROVEMENT SINCE OUR FIRST CLASS. 