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9/19 homework

작성자: mangolang_jiah.lea@l 담당 튜터: TasH2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am helping my sister so she can do more things.
She has to buy some flowers and a cake, and make a restaurant reservation.
She just has to call other family members.
I have to search for what we should prepare for her birthday present.
I suggested a dermatology service.
I have to look for another one.
My mother tried it once, and she said she wants to do it again.
I do it regularly, about twice a week.
In the short term, it feels better the next day.
I usually fix bugs in the project with my co-worker.
When I first joined the company, I did an entry-level task that my team leader gave me.
튜터 교정 답변

I am helping my sister so she can do more things.
She has to buy some flowers and a cake, and make a restaurant reservation.
She just has to call other family members.
I have to search for what we should prepare for her birthday present.
I suggested a dermatology service.
I have to look for another one.
My mother tried it once, and she said she wants to do it again.
I do it regularly, about twice a week.
In the short term, it feels better the next day.
I usually fix bugs in the project with my co-worker.
When I first joined the company, I did an entry-level task that my team leader gave me.

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