Homework-(2)
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
4. They gave me variety of menus, and my co-worker offered that; "how about eating burger?"
> They gave me a variety of menu options, and my co-worker suggested, "How about eating a burger?"
5. I spent the first few days walking around the whole place of my company, and my co-worker and team leader just showed me all the places.
> I spent the first few days walking around the company, and my co-worker and team leader showed me all the places.
6. The most touched place is cafeteria, and then my team leader offered me to take a coffee.
> The Most impressive place is cafeteria.
> They gave me a variety of menu options, and my co-worker suggested, "How about eating a burger?"
5. I spent the first few days walking around the whole place of my company, and my co-worker and team leader just showed me all the places.
> I spent the first few days walking around the company, and my co-worker and team leader showed me all the places.
6. The most touched place is cafeteria, and then my team leader offered me to take a coffee.
> The Most impressive place is cafeteria.
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