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(Making sentilences) Please correct sentences that are in mistake :)

작성자: mangolang_elena.park 담당 튜터: MichelleM1usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Hit the ground running
- My new chapter has just begun. I hope to hit the ground running soon.
2. Mutually beneficial
- I think we should go for plan B to mutually beneficial for both of us.
3. In the black
- I thought it's risky to invest the companies that are not in black. But I realized that some companies are in red due to a lack of financial capacity.
튜터 교정 답변

1. Hit the ground running
- My new chapter has just begun. I hope to hit the ground running soon.
Fixed: My new chapter has just begun. I plan to hit the ground running right away. 


2. Mutually beneficial
- I think we should go for plan B to mutually beneficial for both of us.

Fixed: I think we should go for Plan B because it will be mutually beneficial for both of us.

3. In the black
- I thought it's risky to invest the companies that are not in black. But I realized that some companies are in red due to a lack of financial capacity.

Fixed: I thought it's risky to invest in companies that are not in the black. However, I realized that some companies are in the red due to a lack of initial funding, not poor financial management

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