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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 10. 15 조회 1299

10/15 Homework - (1)

작성자: mangolang_jiah.lea@l 담당 튜터: TasH2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Today was my first day of new project.
> Today was my first day on a new project.

2. They have same stack with before I did so not that difficult.
> They use same stack as before, so it's not that difficult.

3. Weekend is my last holidays. (past)
> Last weekend was my las holiday.

4. I just laid down on sofa and couch as much as I can.
> I just lay on the sofa as much as I could.

5. I watched Netflix series named "crime scene".
> I watched a Netflix series called Crime Scene.
튜터 교정 답변

1. Today was my first day of new project.
> Today was my first day on a new project.
- GREAT :)

2. They have same stack with before I did so not that difficult.
> They use same stack as before, so it's not that difficult.
Correction: They use the same tech stack I worked with before, so it’s not that difficult. 

3. Weekend is my last holidays. (past)
> Last weekend was my last holiday.
- Last weekend was my last holiday. 
Correction:  Last weekend was my final holiday. 

4. I just laid down on sofa and couch as much as I can.
> I just lay on the sofa as much as I could.
Correction: I just laid down on the sofa and couch as much as I could.


5. I watched Netflix series named "crime scene".
> I watched a Netflix series called Crime Scene.
Correction: GREAT :) 

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