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A conversation between me and my friend.

작성자: hri1_a257130 담당 튜터: Summer
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
A : You seem to be good at talking and outgoing!

B : Ah, thank you. I think it's not hard to talk to anyone these days, regardless of who you are.

A : Oh really? Have you ever had any social life?

B : Yes, I've been doing it for about 8 years! at Volvo.

A : Wow~! That's amazing! I think you could change yourself because of that experience.

B : Oh really? Thank you! I actually thought it had an effect on me!
튜터 교정 답변

A : You seem to be conversant and outgoing!

B : Ah, thank you. I think it's not hard to talk to anyone these days, regardless of who you are.

A : Oh really? Have you ever had any social life?

B : Yes, I've been doing it for about 8 years at Volvo.

A : Wow! That's amazing! I think you could change yourself because of that experience.

B : Oh really? Thank you! I actually thought it had an effect on me.

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