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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 11. 14 조회 1101

Evaluate , to achieve the goals

작성자: mangolang_allure@lgu 담당 튜터: CharmW2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Our team evaluates based on delivery time and quantitative figures. We evaluate based on the number of cases and achievement rate.
We established an information leak process and developed an AI project.
Of course, we achieved our goals, but the mindset of the superior evaluator plays a big role.
튜터 교정 답변

Our team evaluates based on delivery time and quantitative figures. We evaluate based on the number of cases and achievement rate.
We established an information leak process and developed an AI project.
Of course, we achieved our goals, but the mindset of the superior evaluator plays a big role.

 

Great work Jin!!

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