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공개 첨삭 완료 2025. 12. 05 조회 1008

Christmas

작성자: jes5723 담당 튜터: Laine
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when I go to my brother's house I take a bus for two hour. but I will go to there this Christmas. I am going to meet my mom and my niece. I have two nieces. They are cute. but they grow so fast. the youngest is going to go elementary school. I worry about what will I buy Christmas gift to give my nieces.
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When I go to my brother's house, I take a bus for two hours. And I will go to there this Christmas. I am going to meet my mom and my niece. I have two nieces. They are cute. But they grow so fast. The youngest is going to go to elementary school. I'm wondering what Christmas gifts will I buy for my nieces.

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