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Homework

작성자: mangolang_allure@lgu 담당 튜터: CharmW2usa
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I once lost a customer because I accidentally treated them rudely. At the time, I blamed myself for not being kind enough, but I soon changed my mindset. I realized that a service-oriented job wasn’t right for me, so I decided to change my job
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I once lost a customer and was hard on myself,

I remember something about that happy moment like it was yesterday.
튜터 교정 답변

I once lost a customer because I accidentally treated them rudely. At the time, I blamed myself for not being kind enough, but I soon changed my mindset. I realized that a service-oriented job wasn’t right for me, so I decided to change my job
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I once lost a customer and was hard on myself,

I remember something about that happy moment like it was yesterday.

 

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