I so tired~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My favorite shooing center is 잠실 롯데 Department store.
It is located in the east of side seoul.
It's a huge seven-story building and it has stores that sell all types of products from groceries to cloths and furniture.
The whole building is very clean and modern-looking so i like it.
Also, it cake only five minutes to get there from my house.
Three years ago, We went to saipan celebrate anniversary wedding with my families.
The atmosphere of the resort we checked into was very traditional and beautiful.
My son and i usually play baseball while my daughter swimming
My wife reads book at the beach and the saipan is the perfect place for my families.
If i get the chance, i'd like to go to trip to Australia.
It's i had gone honeymoon.
It is located in the east of side seoul.
It's a huge seven-story building and it has stores that sell all types of products from groceries to cloths and furniture.
The whole building is very clean and modern-looking so i like it.
Also, it cake only five minutes to get there from my house.
Three years ago, We went to saipan celebrate anniversary wedding with my families.
The atmosphere of the resort we checked into was very traditional and beautiful.
My son and i usually play baseball while my daughter swimming
My wife reads book at the beach and the saipan is the perfect place for my families.
If i get the chance, i'd like to go to trip to Australia.
It's i had gone honeymoon.
튜터 교정 답변
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