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작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
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I woke up 1hour ago. I feel that I have not relived fatigue. Because I have worked 16 hours yesterday. ㅜㅜ
Anyway I will go to car repair shop. So I have to repair my car. One side of my car's front light was broken.
Fotunately shop is located near. I will shower right now. And then I am going to go shop. If I remain time after repair I will also goto exercise. See you later
튜터 교정 답변

I woke up an hour ago. I feel that I haven't relived myself out of my fatigue. Because I had worked for 16 hours yesterday. ㅜㅜ
Anyway, I will go to a car a shop to have my car fixed. One side of my car's front light was broken.
Fotunately the shop is located near my place. I will take a shower and then I'm going to the shop. If there is some time left, I will do exercise. See you later.

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Hi James, thank you again for writing this message. I made some corrections and please compare it to your message. Don't forget to use punctuation marks at each end of the sentences.

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