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공개 첨삭 완료 2026. 02. 12 조회 969

Go to work

작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm working now. It's busy time at 8 am to 9am.
Because it's rush hour. And there are a lot of people.
So checking(body,bag)time takes long time.
But I have trying remain enjoy feeling condition.
And today , I'm not busy with my part. So I'm allowed time ti write. I have lunch in the middle until I finish work and get off work by 4 pm. If i have time i will study english during work. See you sir
튜터 교정 답변

I'm working now. Between 8 a.m. and 9 a.m. is busy time.
Because it's rush hour and there are a lot of people.
Frisking (body and bag) takes long time.
But I enjoy the feeling and today, I'm not busy with my job. So, I'm have time to write. I already had lunch. I will finish work and get off work early at 4 p.m. If I still have time I will study English during working hours. See you sir.

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