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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 16 조회 13978

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작성자: 1102044240 담당 튜터: Paula
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You know, my parents have a lot in common.
Although they don't always agree on things, they have great respect for each other.
They have varied personalities and appearance.
My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin.
Also, he can be funny and she is impetuous.



Faula, I understand your situation.
I think you that too much work.
I'd like to help out, but today's out of the question.
I have a very important prior appointment.
I'm sorry.
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You know, my parents have a lot in common. Although they don't always agree on things, they have great respect for each other. They have varied personalities and appearance. My dad is short and chubby, but my mother is tall and thin. Also, he can be funny and she is impetuous.

-> You know, my parents have a lot in common. Although, they don't always agree on things, they still have great respect for each other.  They have varied personalities and appearance. My dad is short and chubby while my mother is tall and thin. Also, he is funny and she is impetuous.

Faula, I understand your situation. I think you that too much work. I'd like to help out, but today's out of the question. I have a very important prior appointment. I'm sorry.

-> Paula, I understand your situation. I think that you are working too much. I'd like to help you but today's out of the question. I have a very important prior appointment. I'm sorry.

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