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작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I was go to bed ladely yesterday night. So i woke up late today. Suddenly,my friend came to my home. She say that let's go see a koreamovie. I felt annoying. But I'm sorry to say no...I decided go to see a movie.
So. I can't study tonight class. Because movie time from 5 :30 to 7:30. Sorry sir. Seeyou.
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I went to bed late last night and I woke up late today. Unexpectedly, my friend came to my house. She said that let's go see a korea movie. I felt annoyed. But I'm too shy to say no...I decided to go with her to see a movie.
So. I couldn't attend tonight's class. The movie starts from 5 :30 to 7:30. see ya!

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Hi James, thanks for writing! That's okay, we can still see each other next week. It is also good to know that you're not going to attend tonight's class because I didn't go to work. I feel sick. too much stress, and I have to find a way to have money. I needed at least 120 dollars for medical check up and my needs at home. Hope you have a good time at the movies. See you on Monday!!

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