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공개 첨삭 완료 2026. 02. 16 조회 2007

Hi sir

작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
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How was your weekend?
I had worked weekend. And I'm working now.
I had to work for 16 hours. And today working time 16hours too. Because many coworker take vacation.
this week is Korean holiday.
But I don't adjust holiday. Because my department is shift work. So I'm working. I'm very tired,but if I get off tonight, I can rest tomorrow. And I'll get many extra allowance this month. That's why it's tolerable.
Oh! How are you feeling for your condition??
I read your last article. I hope that you have to take good care of your health! I look forward to you in good condition. See you tonight.
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How was your weekend?
I had worked on the weekend and I'm working now.
I had to work for 16 hours and today's working time is also 16hours. Because many my coworkers are taking their vacation.
This week is a Korean holiday.
I never adjust on a holiday because my department is on shifting schedules. So I'm working. I'm exhausted, but if I get off early tonight, I can get some rest tomorrow. And I'll get extra allowances this month. That's why it's tolerable.
Oh! How do you feel, what is your condition??
I read your last article. I hope your okay and you have to take good care of your health! I look forward to see you tonight.

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Hi James, glad to hear from you. How was your date last weekend? Did you watch a good movie? 

That's good to hear that you will get extra pay for working 16 hours.

I feel terrible and needed help with my allowance. I am broke right now. 

Check the corrections I made in your article. See you later!

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