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공개 첨삭 완료 2026. 02. 18 조회 744

Night work

작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi sir! I had exercise after our class. I was go to the work at mid night. I'm working now. Present ,my company is calm. Because of night shift can not see some another department co worker. So it's easy work intensity.
For that reason, we sleep on the chair , read the book, and enjoy sns on our phone. In my case I'm writing this article.
Nowadays I'm worried about your situation. I heard that you lend some money from your coworker.
I think it's relife.But I'm still worried. Sorry to i just worried that. I couldn't help you.ㅜㅜ I wish you get best always. Thank you for read my article.
튜터 교정 답변

Hi sir! I went exercising after our class. I went to work at mid night. I'm working now. At present, my company is peaceful because of the night shift. You can't see any coworker in another department. So, work was easy.
For that reason, we slept in our chair, read a book, and enjoy sns on our phones. In my case I'm writing this article.
Nowadays, I'm worried about your situation. I heard that you borrowed some money from your coworker.
I think it's reality. But I'm still worried. Sorry I couldn't help you.ㅜㅜ. Thank you for reading my article.

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Hi James, you don't have to worry about me. Earning and looking for money is tough. This is reality. Without money, no one cares about you. Thank you for writing to me again. See you in class.

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