Last night work
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm working now. Even though I'm tired, I feel good. Because it's the last night time. Tomorrow, Im going to search information about retirement pension.
Nowadays. most people have thoroughly prepared for old age. So I'd like prepare my old life well. It's difficult about pension plan. But I have to study detailed system.
I have not prepared well so far. I think very stupid myself. However , I think that it's not late. So I will make new annuity account. And then I'm gonna distribute my salary well. I hope collect much money until retirement.
I want to live a planned life even now! ^^
Nowadays. most people have thoroughly prepared for old age. So I'd like prepare my old life well. It's difficult about pension plan. But I have to study detailed system.
I have not prepared well so far. I think very stupid myself. However , I think that it's not late. So I will make new annuity account. And then I'm gonna distribute my salary well. I hope collect much money until retirement.
I want to live a planned life even now! ^^
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