yesterday night
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I watched movie yesterday night. Movie title is a man who live with king. The historical background of movie is 500years ago.
The plot is about tragic death of king who came into exile. um.. the movie is very sad. and i`m immersed story. The conclusion
is good movie. i reservated Krean style cooked pig feet after the movie is over. and then I stop by that store for pick up the food. i ate alone this food with Soju. So i filled very comfortable. Sometimes i think that need the alone time. Because the time is charging for me. I have to go exercise in a few minutes.see you sir~
The plot is about tragic death of king who came into exile. um.. the movie is very sad. and i`m immersed story. The conclusion
is good movie. i reservated Krean style cooked pig feet after the movie is over. and then I stop by that store for pick up the food. i ate alone this food with Soju. So i filled very comfortable. Sometimes i think that need the alone time. Because the time is charging for me. I have to go exercise in a few minutes.see you sir~
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