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공개 첨삭 완료 2026. 02. 26 조회 934

Today my schedule

작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
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Hi sir. Um. You make me that do my best and feel comfortable. So I feel always thank to you. Today I'm gonna go to work at 4 pm. And I'm gonna go to cut my hair before go to work. Hair shop is about half-hour drive away. So i need to hurry up. It's little late.
Maybe tomorrow have to work to 8am from 24pm.ㅜㅜ
Because my coworker take holiday tommorow.I have to work instead of my coworker. Although I'm tired I can make more money. It's hard, But i think good lifestyle to live busy everyday.Thank you for read my article.
I hope you have a peaceful day.
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Hi sir. You make me do my best and feel comfortable. So I feel grateful!. Today I'm gonna go to work at 4 pm, and I'm gonna get a hair cut before going to work. The hair shop is about half an hour drive away. So I need to hurry up. It's a little late.
Maybe tomorrow I have to work to at 8 am to 4pm.ㅜㅜ
Because my coworker took a holiday leave tommorow. I have to work instead of my coworker. Although, I'm tired I can make more money. It's hard, But I think my lifestyle is to live a life thatn is  busy everyday.Thank you for reading my article.
I hope you have a peaceful day.

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Hi James, see you later! Check again the corrections I made. By the way, could you help me out? I need to see a doctor for my health. 

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