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작성자: yanadoo-35_18590166 담당 튜터: Anthony
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I'm sorry. I was absent last night.
I hurted my body little bit while exercise.So I can't get last class.after that, I went work after heating it with hot water. Maybe that's why I feel much better.
Fortunately, I have day off after work this night.
Once again, I'm sorry about that. Um.. I'm working now.
I have a lot of personal business tommorow.
I'm little worried about my back,but I'm going to take care of everything before class. I'll see you in class tommorow in good health.
튜터 교정 답변

I'm sorry. I was absent last night.
I injured my body while exercising. So I attend the last class.after that, I went work after heating it with hot water. Maybe that's why I feel much better.
Fortunately, I took the day off after work last night.
Once again, I'm sorry about that. Um.. I'm working now.
I have a lot of personal business tommorow.
I'm a little worried about my back, but I'm going to take care of everything before the class. I'll see you in class tommorow.

 

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Hi James, good to see you up and running again. How is your back? I hope it's doing okay! See you soon!

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