HI~~~~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Nice to meet U.
When we called that time, I told you reason why I learn the conversation in English
I want to communicate the foreign people.. when I will retire in 2027
I have a lack of an oversea travel experience. So I have a much worries of communicate with them
I hope you help me that point. not yet my capacity of communication skill is low , but if you might teach me. My capacity of communication skill will upgrade ! . like this the English composition is not easy to me ^^
Anyway glad to meet you , I’m very happy and thanks
See u later ~~~
When we called that time, I told you reason why I learn the conversation in English
I want to communicate the foreign people.. when I will retire in 2027
I have a lack of an oversea travel experience. So I have a much worries of communicate with them
I hope you help me that point. not yet my capacity of communication skill is low , but if you might teach me. My capacity of communication skill will upgrade ! . like this the English composition is not easy to me ^^
Anyway glad to meet you , I’m very happy and thanks
See u later ~~~
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