E-mail writing practice
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
* I'm writing this as a practice (as you told me to try it)
To Heni,
I hope this e-mail finds you well.
Hello, I'm Sophia, the engineer from the ABC company.
I'm writing this e-mail to ask some information for produts which your company provides.
From the web page, It is said that machine A gives better operation for # than machine B.
Because operation for # is the one of those my company most cares, if you have more detailed catalog for them, can I ask to get it?
Thank you.
Best regard,
Sophia.
To Heni,
I hope this e-mail finds you well.
Hello, I'm Sophia, the engineer from the ABC company.
I'm writing this e-mail to ask some information for produts which your company provides.
From the web page, It is said that machine A gives better operation for # than machine B.
Because operation for # is the one of those my company most cares, if you have more detailed catalog for them, can I ask to get it?
Thank you.
Best regard,
Sophia.
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