About snacks
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Heni.
Hello!
Since I couldn't come up with business-related topics, instead, I would like to talk about snacks in my office.
In my office, my colleagues and I restock snacks whenever they run out.
Usually, we choose individually wrapped snacks (like cookies, energy bars, candies, mini chocolates, and so on) since they are convenient to eat and easy to keep. Recently, we restocked coconut cookies. They are crispy, sweet, and nutty.
However, it seems like it will run out soon, too.
So, can you give me some recommendations for office snacks?
Maybe I could search/buy some online! :D
Hello!
Since I couldn't come up with business-related topics, instead, I would like to talk about snacks in my office.
In my office, my colleagues and I restock snacks whenever they run out.
Usually, we choose individually wrapped snacks (like cookies, energy bars, candies, mini chocolates, and so on) since they are convenient to eat and easy to keep. Recently, we restocked coconut cookies. They are crispy, sweet, and nutty.
However, it seems like it will run out soon, too.
So, can you give me some recommendations for office snacks?
Maybe I could search/buy some online! :D
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