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Tourist attractions?

작성자: hunet_kimm-jkc098 담당 튜터: Heni1
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Hello!
It's been a while to writing here (sorry!)
First of all, I really appreciate for your supporting for the past few weeks. It really helped me! Thanks!!

By the way, since I recieved some vacatoon days from the company, I'm planning to go on a trip to Tokyo, Japan for the next week! :D

So, I also became curious about tourist attractions in the USA! Can you recommend me some of those to visit (maybe in the fufure), please? Thank you!
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Hello!
It's been a while SINCE I WROTE (writing here) (sorry!)
First of all, I really appreciate (for) your SUPPORT for the past few weeks. It really helped me! Thanks!!

By the way, since I recEIved some vacatIon days from the company, I'm planning to go on a trip to Tokyo, Japan for the next week! :D

(So,) I also AM curious about tourist attractions in the USA(!) Can you recommend me some of those to visit (maybe in the fufure), please? Thank you!

 

Hi Sophia,

I'm very glad I was able to encourage you on the last step your Ph.D.journey.

Tourist attractions are different in any part of the country. I will tell you some in class.

Again, CONGRATULASTIONS on getting your doctoral degree!!

 

Best of luck in the future,

Heni

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