News article?
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello!
Today, I visited Breaking News English.com and faced a news article about...giant cockroaches!
First of all, I was shocked by the picture.
Because the bugs in that picture...
They seem like TOO big.
And I was also surprised by the contents.
Amazed by the fact that there was soneone who tried to smuggle *100,000 giant roaches*.
I just can't help but feel sorry for the officers who had to confront thousands of roaches and deal with them.
Thia article will really remain in my head...
So, is there any article that still remain in your mind?
If there is, please introdue it to me? Thanks!
Today, I visited Breaking News English.com and faced a news article about...giant cockroaches!
First of all, I was shocked by the picture.
Because the bugs in that picture...
They seem like TOO big.
And I was also surprised by the contents.
Amazed by the fact that there was soneone who tried to smuggle *100,000 giant roaches*.
I just can't help but feel sorry for the officers who had to confront thousands of roaches and deal with them.
Thia article will really remain in my head...
So, is there any article that still remain in your mind?
If there is, please introdue it to me? Thanks!
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