Hello ~ I'm Sophia
Today is the first time of our class. I've just finished the today's class.
It was great time. And I hope that I can improve my English skill, especially speaking skills.
Actually, now I'm preparing my employment, so speaking skill is very important to me.
I'll do my best, although it is just 15 minutes.
I look forward to talking with you ~
Hi, I'm Sophia. Thank you for the name :)
Today is the first time of our class. I've just finished the today's class.
It was great time. And I hope that I can improve my English skill, especially speaking skills.
Actually, now I'm preparing my employment, so speaking skill is very important to me.
I'll do my best, although it is just 15 minutes.
I look forward to talking with you ~
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Hello Sophia! 
It was nice to have met you! You did very well with the level test, and I'm very happy to have you as my student. 
Below is your message to me, corrected. I hope this helps. See you next time in class! 
Take care for now! 
English Teacher Brett
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Hi, I'm Sophia. Thank you for the name! Today was our first class, and I just finished it. I had a great time and hope to improve my English, especially my speaking. I'm preparing for employment now, so speaking skills are very important. I’ll do my best, even if it’s just 15 minutes.