My family
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have a mother, elder sister, younger brother.
They live together except me in other city.
When i was 17, my father died by cancer.
I live in 화성 city with my wife and children now.
I was married in 1993 and I have one son and one daughter.
There are five people in my family including me.
My son entered university last year and
my daughter is a third-year student in high school.
It is difficult to hang out together, because my family's hobby is different.
I like to go out, my wife wants to stay home,
my son likes internet game, my princess likes karaoke.
However, my family understanding each other is very happy.
They live together except me in other city.
When i was 17, my father died by cancer.
I live in 화성 city with my wife and children now.
I was married in 1993 and I have one son and one daughter.
There are five people in my family including me.
My son entered university last year and
my daughter is a third-year student in high school.
It is difficult to hang out together, because my family's hobby is different.
I like to go out, my wife wants to stay home,
my son likes internet game, my princess likes karaoke.
However, my family understanding each other is very happy.
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