Google Earth
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello!
I read an article about Google Earth's flight simulator at Breaking News English.com.
The article says that people can now use the flight simulator (beta) on a web browser without installing any program.
So, I tried, and soon my plane started to turn round and round.
And before long, it fell on the ground.
Even though the flight simulator was hard to control, it was fun to look around the world.
With Google Earth (not using the flight simulator), I visited Tokyo.
Although it looked like a miniature, I could find some places I had visited.
It was amazing!
I read an article about Google Earth's flight simulator at Breaking News English.com.
The article says that people can now use the flight simulator (beta) on a web browser without installing any program.
So, I tried, and soon my plane started to turn round and round.
And before long, it fell on the ground.
Even though the flight simulator was hard to control, it was fun to look around the world.
With Google Earth (not using the flight simulator), I visited Tokyo.
Although it looked like a miniature, I could find some places I had visited.
It was amazing!
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