Nice to meet you!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
To Leigh,
Hello, This is Sophia. (It's just my English name that my teacher gave to me when I was young.)
I live in Daejeon, which is in the middle part of South Korea.
In South Korea, Daejeon is known for its great local bakeries.
My hobby is watching YouTube videos, mostly about food and cooking.
Even though I'm not good at cooking, I just like watching them.
And I have a request:
If we are going to use the textbook, can we start from chapter 16, please?
Because this is my third time applying for the lesson "Business English (Presentation)".
Thank you!
Hello, This is Sophia. (It's just my English name that my teacher gave to me when I was young.)
I live in Daejeon, which is in the middle part of South Korea.
In South Korea, Daejeon is known for its great local bakeries.
My hobby is watching YouTube videos, mostly about food and cooking.
Even though I'm not good at cooking, I just like watching them.
And I have a request:
If we are going to use the textbook, can we start from chapter 16, please?
Because this is my third time applying for the lesson "Business English (Presentation)".
Thank you!
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