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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 07. 16 조회 12291

Account

작성자: 1102044240 담당 튜터: Paula
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
You must visit the bank in person to open an account in order to minimize unnecessary work.
You call the bank first to ask what you need to prepare in advance.
After preparing the necessary documentation you visit the bank.
You need to fill out all the necessary information and report documentation.
튜터 교정 답변

You must visit the bank in person to open an account in order to minimize unnecessary work.

-> You must visit the bank personally to open an account in order to minimize unnecessary work.

You call the bank first to ask what you need to prepare in advance.

After preparing the necessary documentation you visit the bank.

-> After preparing the necessary documents you can visit the bank.

You need to fill out all the necessary information and report documentation.

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