Please, check this question and answer
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Good morning ! Teacher Bree.
Nowadays I try to get high score on the opic test,
so i want you to check this answer.
here is question. and next is my answer about question.
Compare the activities which children usually do at the park as opposed to those which adults do while at the park.
Whenever I go to the park, I can see two kinds of group. one group is family. they are composed of some adults and some kids. May be adults are parents. seeing them, adult usually watch their children. because they are care about their children. on the other hands, children run around and play with their friends.
second group is a person coming alone. usually this group is composed of adult. they come to the park for health. they are walking or running or riding a bicycle around the park.
Nowadays I try to get high score on the opic test,
so i want you to check this answer.
here is question. and next is my answer about question.
Compare the activities which children usually do at the park as opposed to those which adults do while at the park.
Whenever I go to the park, I can see two kinds of group. one group is family. they are composed of some adults and some kids. May be adults are parents. seeing them, adult usually watch their children. because they are care about their children. on the other hands, children run around and play with their friends.
second group is a person coming alone. usually this group is composed of adult. they come to the park for health. they are walking or running or riding a bicycle around the park.
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