The Way to Protect Werther-Effect
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
People, especially young children, tend to follow the act of celebrities. Pop stars' fashion styles become the trends between teenagers. Therefore, famous people should strive to give positive influence on their followers as a mentor. They should not do negative acts that are banned from the society including drugs, suicide, prohibited gambling etc.
These movement can be made through cooperation with the media and related biz-men. The entertainment companies should make beneficial contents considering the effect on the public.
The media and publishers should express these contents for the without distortion. In addition, parents and teachers should lead their children for the right way.
These movement can be made through cooperation with the media and related biz-men. The entertainment companies should make beneficial contents considering the effect on the public.
The media and publishers should express these contents for the without distortion. In addition, parents and teachers should lead their children for the right way.
튜터 교정 답변
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