Go camping with my friend next weekend ..
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Hi, Bree. This is Jason.
I'm calling to ask you whether you can join my camping trip next weekend.
Last time when we talked about camping, I felt that you were also quite interested in going,
so I'd like to ask you.
If you can join us, that would be great.
But before we decide on next weekend's camping.
I thought that I should ask about your opinion on the camping.
First, where do you like to go camping?
Is there any special place you want to go? If so, please don't hesitate to tell me.
And another thing, do you have a tent? If you join us, my tent may be insufficient.
If you don't have one, we have to ask other friends whether they have one we can borrow.
Anyway, please call me back and tell me your decision as soon as possible.
Bye.
I'm calling to ask you whether you can join my camping trip next weekend.
Last time when we talked about camping, I felt that you were also quite interested in going,
so I'd like to ask you.
If you can join us, that would be great.
But before we decide on next weekend's camping.
I thought that I should ask about your opinion on the camping.
First, where do you like to go camping?
Is there any special place you want to go? If so, please don't hesitate to tell me.
And another thing, do you have a tent? If you join us, my tent may be insufficient.
If you don't have one, we have to ask other friends whether they have one we can borrow.
Anyway, please call me back and tell me your decision as soon as possible.
Bye.
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